That Girl

That Girl

A Poem by thecoolone52

 

Its that girl
When you think you have her
You never do
Cover yourself
   Or she’ll see right through you

© 2008 thecoolone52


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That is awesome. Talk about compressed language. You just expressed a pretty annoying but everpresent fact of life in like five lines. I applaud you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a pretty good poem. I think I know that girl.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this one. It's amazing how ridiculous dating has become. The less attention I've given someone, the more it has worked to my advantage. How absurd is that?!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


hmmm...cool.

Posted 16 Years Ago


straight and to the point. A good write

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I like this... pdc

Posted 16 Years Ago


So very true!! I've run into a bunch of them over the years.
Alaska Sam

Posted 16 Years Ago


oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.
you called it.
i like it kuz its true.
haha.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2008

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thecoolone52
thecoolone52

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I like to write fiction. It has to be bizzare and orginal or its basically worthless to me. Cause if you write what someone else wrote then whats the point of writing at all? My gramar blows big donke.. more..

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