CRAZY

alright this is dedicated to britney spears i feel bad cause everyone picks on her. I pick on her too so i guess I feel into the trend.

 

CRAZY  

 

What if we had no TV

A box that turns

People into popularity

A mass of channels

With no clarity

Like Vh1

Or MTV

The worst one of them all

Is definitely “E” 

Where all they do is talk

S**t out Brittany

Who had a bunch of babies

Then supposedly goes crazy

I would turn the channel

However I’m too lazy 

 

Reviews

[C.B.]

Loved it. I loved the rythym, the flow, the meaning, the humor, and especially the last part because I totally do the same exact thing.

PS. on a side note. MTV reminded me of it. I work at a nursing home and this lady was trying to take off her shirt cause she's crazier than brit spears. one of the nurses yelled at her and was like 'THIS AINT NO MTV MUSIC VIDEO!' True story, true story.

[Alexander W. Quinn]

...yeah, I'm guilty of making fun of her to. :) Great write, and a fun read.

[Melissia Ann]

WOW I never looked a TV that way LOL good one though thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

instead of "goes crazy" I would try "went crazy" other than that, it's a solid write. :)

[An Ordinary Woman]

LOL Cute, very cute. I liked it. I think she has it bad and I feel badly for her too. She obviously has issues that need to be dealt with and she's just a kid herself. But she has babies and they matter too. I wish her well.
Good writing!

[Ed Rector]

this made me laugh... great humurous piece although it is true as well... great rhyme scheme as well... well written.

[Jessica Snider]

HAHAHAH i love how you dedicated this to britney spears! sorry i havn't been on here for awhile, i've been working on that chapterrr though.
i really like this :]

[xxCrashingxx]

haha =] i like this one. its VERY true and totally funny