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A Poem by theladyjai
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this is the only place i can admit these feelings

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i long 4 u still

everyday in my mind i think of how u might be thinking of me

i wonder how different things could be if i had told u how i felt in the 1st place

and didnt lie 2 cover my pride

i still hold the bar up 2 ur standards i dont want any man less than

miss talkin 2 u bout the crazy thoughts in my head

while u carefully examined them all

even when u were mad at me i still wanted 2 hear ur voice

i tried 2 change

but i surely failed

because u dont want me the way i want u 2

over and over again i wanted 2 make u believe i was strong

and that i could be trusted and that u could love me

that i would be there 4 u no matter what

 

but u told me straight out u didnt want me or my love

i dont know y i cared so much

and i still do

© 2008 theladyjai


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Is writen in the new text version of english, nice write though. Dawn

Posted 15 Years Ago


Emotional and honest seems like you wrote to get it out and feel better hope it worked =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I am a student currently at OSU. I have been writing since I was little but I have yet to complete a full story. I have alot of good ideas that sometimes over take me ( I have occasional ADD) and I wa.. more..

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