who the hell cares??? can u hear me out there???

should be going 2 class...

im addicted

need a prescription

the cure

someone who listens

invisble sickness

tired of existin

not livin

so much bottled up

like pop thats been dropped

bout 2 explode when u open the top

i need 2 know u listened

 

Author's Note

thank u 4 reading...im goin 2 class now

Reviews

[The realest]

straight forward and the rhyme scheme seemed rugged like the feel of the poem - good stuff

[Poeticpiers]

I listened your message is very clear but would read much better in proper english withot the textspeak

[Dawn]

hope its a good class.

I listened and heard you loud and clear.

Dawn