their love is fierce.

Why love is fierce. I know this poem didn't have an ending but that's because their love never ended. i know this poem didn't make sense but that's because nothings harder to describe then love.

A man is alone, figuratively and literally.

She enters,His great love.

The one he once lost brutally.

All he wants is to get a hold of.

A hold of his breath, his words, her.

He looks into her eyes.

Remembers what they once were.

She makes his broken heart rise.

He takes her hand.

She strokes his face.

They can barley stand.

She reminds him of grace.

They both have gone through pain.

Nothing comes to mind the short time they have together.

On a side note she made his I phone call him master Wayne.

Her skin... softer then a feather.

They hold on tight,

As the time flies by.

She, his queen and he, her dark knight.

Her beauty can not be denied, by the bye.

He finally exclaims I love you.

All day every day that's all he thinks about.

She returns with I love you too.

Before they know it, times all out.

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[Odayin]

This poem has a grea reasons to not make sense at some parts so i actually understood it. I think that was pretty creative and you definitely did it well, nicely done.
"A hold of his breath, his words, her.
He looks into her eyes.
Remembers what they once were.
She makes his broken heart rise."
I could start my day with those words^