The Hand You Held

Expression of Love,Anguish,Regression and Anger..."The LOVE Found and Lost"...

"The Day Dawned......

Today everything seems faded away...

No I won't let him make me cry....

No,Not today! "

And then just a second later,

You crossed my mind again.

How I drank that sea of tears,

I wish you could feel the pain.

And then I looked upon my hand and the lines of fate,

How you kept on reminding me-"You are my Soulmate".

And I look upon my hand remembering when you held it,

Ohh!! Yes the memories remain.

And then I remembered When your voice was filled with love,

I can't believe You are giving this Pain.

And yet again I rememered your eyes The moment you told me you loved me,

And the emotions they held.

Hats off to you!!

How brilliantly you Pretend!

And then my glance came on that scar,

How for your happiness I could have given my Life,

Never thought you would do this someday,

I trusted You so much that This thought never even crossed my mind.

Uncontrollable it was...a tear fell along my cheek,

As the Sunlight covered the Dew,

And then I remembered How after a year you realised,

"I never had feelings for You"...

No! I would not cry a tear more,

After these lines for me You never existed.

And yes I would be back to my happy self again,

Can't be like you so twisted!

Now! I am never looking back,

Thanks to You I am so headstrong!

And when You say You miss me afterwards,

Just remember It its Your fault that I am gone!

Someday You will know My Worth , My feelings and How much I still Care,

Someday you will miss the hand you held coz I know Your's would be bare.

I Promise Baby You will cry..Like I Did before....

When You will realise How many Are True,

I Promise you will cry,remembering the days,

That I Belonged To You...

Reviews

[zainul]

Conversation of a real lover.
I can relate to such passionate thoughts.

[Pragya Saxena]

Thankyou Sir :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,Pragya.:)

[Sami Khalil]

Someday the feelings that are bared will be paired...Excellent...:).............

[Pragya Saxena]

Thankyou :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[Akshay Rawal]

Good this tells us to be happy anyway and not to cling upon past experiences.The other person is just too insignificant to affect our lives...Thanks Pragya

[Pragya Saxena]

Thanks Akshay, although this poem was written in the exact opposite mindset :D

[Chiradeep Patra]

Very well written emotions. When we pen down our emotion either we get satisfied or feel relieved.

Keep writing... God bless!

[Pragya Saxena]

Thank You ! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A poignant and sad piece about the depth of betrayal in love.

[Pragya Saxena]

Thanks for reading :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

anyone who has ever loved deeply and had their heart torn out can relate to this beautiful piece. Wonderfully written

[Pragya Saxena]

Thank You... :)