Vanish

Vanish

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

I hate feeling like this 
so hurt and in pain 
As if nothing that matters
will ever be the same 

The lights gone out 
of my fragile soul 
The darkness has moved in 
taken over control 

I wish I could sleep 
for a thousand years 
Then wake up in heaven 
where there are no tears 

I wish I could fly 
away from this life 
Set my heart free 
let my spirit take flight 

I want to disappear 
Into the darkest void 
From the cruel hearts of man 
where I can't be destroyed


Just vanish from sight

and be no more

But I have to stay

for the ones I adore

 

© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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the emotions were flowing from the poem...i know that no hell would be cruel than earth...you are a great writer...the piece was excellently excellent...wonderfully wonderful...and fantasticly fantastic...lovely piece...wonderful read...greatly written...keep writing like this...:-)

DEVANSHU RAJPUT

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Wpww!!!

11 Years Ago

can someone read some of mine!!! pleaze
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Later today i will when I've finished my work :)



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So gripping in emotion and pain and sorrow but I like how at the end you offer a ray of hope and a reason to keep on going.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
this is the most amazing sorta of thriller poem ever!!! graet.. . magnificent... spectacular job!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
love it!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you
It' good jess... =3

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Hopefully the darkest void can be the brightest light, the warmest heart of a new lover. Very well written. And we do adore you < 3

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kee your a sweet guy :)
You and I seem to have similar ways of how we were treated by love, and loved ones. As our heart was tugging by the forces of evil, until we no longer to bear the burden.
Nicely written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) Yes very true.
A feeling we have all felt my friend....Life has a way of chewing us up a spitting us out.....Very well penned.....Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you and yes so very true.
the emotions were flowing from the poem...i know that no hell would be cruel than earth...you are a great writer...the piece was excellently excellent...wonderfully wonderful...and fantasticly fantastic...lovely piece...wonderful read...greatly written...keep writing like this...:-)

DEVANSHU RAJPUT

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Wpww!!!

11 Years Ago

can someone read some of mine!!! pleaze
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Later today i will when I've finished my work :)
Well I can understand feeling like this but without life on Earth you cannot appreciate heaven and most importantly earn your place there by what you do here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Yes true, thank you :)
Selfishness is ok but as you say there are limits!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

True. Thank you.

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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