Hide and seek

My problem as a shygirl when i crush on a guy

Hide and seek

I wanna play hide and seek
I will hide Untill you find me but when i speak
You turn around and look for a sign
But you wont see me thats fine
It's how it supposed to be
Because the game is over
when You notice me

Author's Note

So let me know what you think about it 💖

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

It's always too late to be not so "coy" when love's already gone...
I like the concept of your poetry. Hide and Seek title's quite "erotic" (as per my profession says), but here in your poetry, I see/read a very faithful and collaborative junction of its portray in devoted-words. I believe, "Hide & Seek" should be a very outraged "Sign" that lovers must catch or understand or may be, read through its hues .. every move one takes to step up the heart's or should be meant to be "Read" in gestures, before it becomes too later ev'n to categorize what kinda love it's been .. to heart. Very nice imagery you dappled here on verses. Would be looking forward to read such more shades of your heart!

[theshygirl]

Thank you so much !!!! All words are straight from the heart 💖

[Sami Khalil]

Lovely, so lovely and so noticeable...Bravo........................

[AaronFreitas]

I love your honesty in these words... maybe, just maybe he is also shy and is waiting for you to notice him ;) Nice work :)

[wordman]

a sweet write about a shy girl,so when he notices you,you hide

[Jake Kokoris]

There's a lot of potential at the heart of this central idea. I would slow it down a bit though; I don't think such a frantic tone lends well to this type of poem. I did like the mischievous and defiant voice of the speaker. Nice job

[dexterous sam]

hi ! i'm new in here ...your short poem is deep .it contains attitude ,not easy to catch ,well versed with the language to dissipate the gravity of the pain emerged in the heart of an individual..good job