It's funny

It's funny how even

when you've completely forgotten 

about the story

Its words are still there.

Staining the white paper

Under a thick cover

of some kind

or another

My vision is terrible

I can't see anything

beyond

this journal.

The board is smeared;

The window is blue,

But

Your motives are clear.

A perfectly rounded punctuation.

And I wish that these eyes

These eyes that chose to see this world

in watercolor

could have chosen 

another focus. 

Reviews

[roarke]

without a doubt, you have the artist touch about your prose. A gift to be sure.

Just the right amount of words, just the right amount of flow, just a touch of inner intimacy.
Well balanced.

[Revolutionary]

I really like the metaphore.I dabble in photography,so this combined my two hobbies.poetry and visual