Such a Pity.

Such a Pity.

A Poem by theunionisloud

It's a shame 
This perfect silence
Must be interuppted
For the sake of a petty rhyme. 
And this one, at that

© 2011 theunionisloud


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lol. wit, insight, sage-like epiphany.

I'd say aptly fitting, 'cause it doesn't rhyme....



Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and Cute. I think you can remove the first "that". I nearly despise "that" word. The title reminds me of David Bowie speaking to Jennifer Connolly in the Labyrinth.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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