Two Extremes, No Average

Hello!

Who am I?

Why, I'm very.

All or nothing.

Extreme, Irrational.

I don't care for

whichever adjective

f

o

l

l

o

w

s

,

So long as 

I am

A Lot of it!

If I knew about moderation,

I'd be

very

moderate.

Extremely

SUBTLE

But that would make me a

huge

liar,

And I'm a 

Really,

really

honest person. 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

There is almost a meaningful contradiction here. SOme people will compliment the format, I am complimenting that inner meaning that when looked at kicks right in the balls.
Extremely subtle..almost a moving paradox.
The humor is here. The fact that you say that it deosnt matter what adjective follows BUT you dojn't want to be a liar and say you are honest.
Clever my dear, and drags the reader to see it all.

The formatting is almost there to throw off the reader from the meaning which is a dangerous game, but it still comes through.

Nicely done

[roarke]

Again another jazz song analogy, "All or Nothing At All"
This has both a modern and retro undercurrent,

All nuance
All molten emotion.

with a twist of wit.

I personally see nothing wrong with the combination illustrated here.

[Dane Osborne]

I really dig the flow and how you arranged and shifted the words. That's something i'm known for doing myself. The only thing I would suggest is maybe possibly work on the last stanza. It seemed too simplistic. But I think this has great potential to grow into something more if you work on it. I still like it though, it has a beat generation/early diane di prima type feel and i can dig that.

[Rose]

I love how self-aware it is.

[Jim Parson]

This is interesting and clever. A very intelligent piece. Well done!

[Moflo]

I liked your formatting here a lot, I think it really added to the effect of the poem and the profound display of emotion. Very nice write.