Unsuspecting

Unsuspecting

A Poem by theunionisloud
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Not my most creative, but this is where my mind has been lately...

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East of here, West of There,
as high as one can be
Perched upon a fenceless ledge
overlooking an impossibly blue sea

I dabble in my senseless thoughts,
I sip a late night coffee
a breeze caresses the foliage
The wind howls softly

I cannot be the only one
To savor this esprit
For I have found the perfect place
where you will come and find me. 

© 2011 theunionisloud


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lol. I'm seeing songs tonight. "East of the Sun, West of the Moon" slow jazz standard. Your second stanza is a mirror image of my location.

Don't worry, you'll definitely be found.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know of these places ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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simplicity is sometimes the best route! and this shows that!!! "a fenceless ledge" - clever!! the second stanza is my favourite though - the breeze caressing the foliage!! nice!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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