learn how to spell love

got bored not good at poems so you know

How can I show my colours when you try out shine me?

How can it be after all this time I still love you?

Tell me how can this be?

Tell me how can I move on and with who?

Can you even try to love me the way I love you?

Or I’m I really nothing,

Author's Note

terrible at this stuff

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Great poem and do mostly poems
but I write short stories sometimes
I do free verse.



Nicely done great Job!



thank you for sharing.




Blessings. Benita

[PurpleQuartz]

This is really nice!

[The dark story]

who says so that you are not good at poetry.this is really nice .....
"Tell me how can I move on and with who?".i liked this line the most...all you need is just to work a little more on the rhyme(though sometimes it really doesn't matter)

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. good poem..
learn more and you'll write wonderful poems
:)