The Definition of Pain

pain can strike anytime
it can make you feel exposed
but there is beauty in suffering
beauty stands in 
getting up 
after you've been knocked down 
by who you loved .

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

that's quite heartfelt now. ouch!

it's really such a shame... when one has to pay the amount of love in disguise of piercing throu' the canal of hurt. yes, it's way horrific and terrible when one has to pass throu' such moments of life. hey i happen to know, once you're fallen in love, it's hard to get rid of its infatuated vibes, perhaps, if... you're ev'n already so drained into its pleasure, it's way harder to compromise one's heart with its love-shades, & of course, with the paradox of time it certainly brings to one's heart. kinda very deep, & eye-catching poetry you come to lick down once again. the stream of today's youth you be portraying here around in words for sure! nice.

[horizon]

Yuuppp...it's very true..I agree when you come out of the pain we become much stronger bcoz we don't fear from anything

[Inject Positivity]

very true... this is a very wise thought.... pain can indeed touch anyone's life making every part vulnerable but as you said there is a beauty in pain which is the getting up to our feet again after being broken by our loved ones.... beautifully done dear poetess.... full ratings.....

[Ioana Georgiana]

Thank you.