Stormy Skies

Stormy Skies

A Poem by Sarah Marie

Black waves,
A mirroring sky-
Rushing waves,
And roaring thunder
Where stars lie-
Crashing waves,
And continuous winds
Determined to not die-
Know a storm is coming,
The storm is near;
Let the rains fall,
The sky’s quick tears;
Feel the storm growing,
For the storm is here. 

© 2012 Sarah Marie


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Preciseness remains but you let the thought come out pretty nicely, that's the reason what makes it outta ordinary. :) I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good job Sarah!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarah Marie

11 Years Ago

Why, thank you!
Levi Levin

11 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
Good work, I loved this

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the idea of this poem and the images you have here. In some way the "black waves" and the "mirroring sky" remind me of a scene from Cormac Mccarthy's novel The Road.

I think this is the solid poem as is, and I enjoyed reading it. I do think that some of the lines could be re-ordered to add a bit more clarity and to smooth out the progression of events. Overall though, I liked what I saw and I am glad I found this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


fast paced and suspenseful. I like how you kept coming back to the waves, which often reflect the sky above. I do like storms, and you've captured one nicely. ~em

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarah Marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you like this. I appreciate your review!

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Sarah Marie
Sarah Marie

my own world...come visit me!, SC



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