Storm Cloud Eyes

Storm Cloud Eyes

A Poem by Sarah Marie

The rain
Washes away the tears
But can only cloak
The pain;
Heartache still remains
In the midst a storm,
Pretending to disappear.
It carelessly lies,
Concealing the tears cried
Until dry eyes 
Can be true and have no need
For a rainy day’s disguise. 

© 2013 Sarah Marie


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thank you...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the last line best. I like the rain filled theme too. Well done Sarah.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deep and thought filled. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a vivid description of the storms within. You speak of the pain that pours out, vivid and sharp, and then of those times we wear masks so no one can know. Your words ache.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Sarah Marie
Sarah Marie

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