Unique

Unique

A Poem by Sarah Marie

I am a fish

In a sea of countless others

Who have prettier fins

That shimmer far brighter than mine;

I am a bird

In an endless sky

Shared by eagles to robins

That better soar than I;

I am a woman

Surrounded by one million more,

Many fairer, many smarter, and many kinder-

Yet not one is quite like me.

I am my own,

Free to do as I please,

Free to live and learn and roam

In ways unique to only me.

© 2013 Sarah Marie


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I loved how you used comparisons to show how there are people always 'better' than us, but should never waste time comparing ourselves and instead be happy with who we are. We are all unique in our own way: and that's a good thing! Good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarah Marie

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I am glad you like this. I really only couldn't help but write a poem with a fish line.. .. read more
How comparisons can only break us. Your confessions make my heart ache, for no one could ever take your place. In the wildness of this universe you are here and that is beautiful beyond belief, dear one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarah Marie

11 Years Ago

:) Thank you for the lovely comment!
Oooooooh! VERY good! Yay for the unique! *fist bump* Love the fish idea, and the end was awesome! Tots agree, we are all amazing! And you are BRILLIANT!!! XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


EverleafOwl

11 Years Ago

You are SOOOOO welcome! A sweet pleasure to read! I've said this before, but i'm new on this site, a.. read more
Sarah Marie

11 Years Ago

aww well thank you again! :) And welcome to WritersCafe!!! I look forward to reading your work!
EverleafOwl

11 Years Ago

Aw, thanks! I really appreciate that! :D

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Added on March 3, 2013
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Sarah Marie
Sarah Marie

my own world...come visit me!, SC



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Aspiring starving artist: Bachelor's degree in English, minor in professional writing, concentration in writing, unofficial concentration in British literature...2017 more..

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