The day I died inside

The day I died inside

A Poem by Julie
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This is about a breakup, oviously.

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The day I died inside
you took apart of my life
my heart dwelled up with pain
as my world became a haze

My teary eyes,
you said you'd never forget
I guess that was a lie 
when you said I was a regret.

The things you've said that day
won't leave the past.
The words you've said
hit me hard and fast.

The day I died inside
you took apart of my life
my heart dwelled up with pain as
my world became a haze.

© 2010 Julie


Author's Note

Julie
I edited the poem, hope you all like this better. It's much clearer and it makes a lot more sense.

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Thankyou. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


makes perfect sense to me.
well expressed with simplicity
that we can relate too easily.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is really awesom and i love it and you di an awesome job on it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very beautiful. Your poems is filled with emotions and I liked it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2010
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Julie
Julie

Red Lion, PA



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Hey. I love writing poetry... and listening to music. I love goth guys... even though I'm not goth. I love walking in the rain... I love to listen to music. Bullet for my valentine atreyu 30 seconds .. more..

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