Half Of The Full Face At Any Given Time

It's a poem with a longer name

On the one side, I could be the blissful calm 

On the other, I could be the utter chaos

Perhaps I'm just a patient, ticking time bomb 

But perhaps I'm just an oblivious, wandering stray lost

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Amber Lily]

Moods can easily change with the flip of a coin, I like that analogy here. Unpredictable, even to yourself. A great write :)

[Aphy!]

Simple, beautiful
It's amazing how just a few words can affect someone.
The constant struggle in my head going on between good and "evil"
Very lovely piece buddy
Aphy

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the feel of struggle in the words. Allowed the reader to feel the internal struggle leading to wild ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jess]

AMAZING! Seems like a volatile and unpredictable personality. I can relate to it. Great job.

[Angel of the devil]

this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bear]

A microcosm of life, we walk the titering line between the calm and chaos just waiting for something to go wrong and blow up on us as we try to find the right path to happiness. Masterfully done, I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Richard Mueller]

Snap! Snap! ;) Get it right!