After Today

After Today

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
"

true friendship

"
My Dearest so strong,
yet tears will fall.
From what you feel,
how I could not see,
before my needs 
until today
I could feel that pain.
The need to hug you,
with all my might
was the right move
And to hold you tight,
because your not alone,
in this plight.
remember,
To never let go 
Until the dark of night,
becomes day.

© 2021 Mauricio Montoya


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Some poets write about needing someone like it's an addictive situation (which I very much dislike) and this is why I want to celebrate your poem about people needing people . . . this is what healthy needing looks like. It's not always a perfect flow, as you point out, but when two people connect, there's nothing like that boost of energy that can give the lives involved (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


there is not a one of us who can not use at least an occasional arm to lean on
Nicely offered

Posted 3 Years Ago


Emotive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Enjoyed reading it today. I hope the love affair works out. Thanks so much for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work from long ago. Sara

Posted 3 Years Ago


we need friends like this to hold us during the darkest nights...until that morning light shines
and we feel more like facing a day.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A hug or a kind gesture can energize someone and make their day. So lovely. lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Years Ago

yeah, I'm learning that, thank you you made my day.
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So gentle, so delicate this poem is... A hug with love can soothe a mind and a voice of assurance can do wonder... I love this poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Years Ago

thanks I love your input.
.

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
It’s is amazing what a hug or a smile can do

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Years Ago

unconditional love, sister, thanks.
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

You are more than welcome. Hugs

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Added on March 13, 2021
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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