Our Linda Amor

 

  towards the sky,

Hoping to touch a cloud, 

with my eyes.

There’s an abundant beauty 

the world always offers.

 I Yearn for you, 

so I can share.

what I see

 I fill my dreams of thee 

to keep me near.

 a distant heart, is empty,

 when you’re so far.

How can I come closer?

Without your sunshine

 by my side.

 The joy of  laughter fore fills me,

The present of your beauty surrounds me

There’s nothing, more which could endear me

For it’s everything I adore.

 In this Tierra Linda

It is you.

And only you.

mother earth

our linda Amor.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

Author's Note

i wrote this a while back but came back to remove, replace and fix it, hope you enjoy and thank you for reading. have a great day in every time zone, lol.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is how I feel about the nature-abundant haven where I live. For most of this poem, I felt this was a love between two humans & I was admiring how the beloved is painted in a wide variety of attractive ways, great details (not just saying I love you becuz you make me feel good -- lame -- like so many love poems do). But then when I realized this was love between human and mother earth, that's when I really came to admire all the ways you illustrate the good feelings we can get as we love nature (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mauricio Montoya]

it was and is because she no longer here but mother is the two love of my life

[Mauricio Montoya]

Margie thank you for read and your input.

[Fran Marie]

Quite lovely and beautifuly penned

[An Ordinary Woman]

Another lovely write, perhaps for the same woman as the last poem? I'm sure she is quite deserving. I wish you both very well....

[Liza]

que lindo! me encanta leer en español - es un lenguage bien rico y pasionado.

[Xena]

aww very sweet.. she was a lucky girl ;) and thanks for the comment :)

[emmajoy]

Sometimes memories need to be locked safely away, if only to be reminded how love keeps us warm. This is a very sweetly subtle piece of writing.

[Art]

There are those special moments my friend...a lasting impression is held within the memories of the heart and soul...nice work...

[Tia Sanchez]

Me gusta mucho este poema ... una hermosa imagen, poética del amor. I'm sure she was flattered as she read this.

[Mary]

a very lucky someone special

[StarryeyedGirl]

just reading it radiates the beauty of the words, all put together and well visualized in my head. Amazing work

[YouoweYoupay]

Expresses readiness to give as much as this love needs. Plain but warm. Keep on writing.