My Love for Her

mi linda amor

My Love for Her

 

My emotions 

so strong,

I’m drawn.

Propelled, 

without sight.

 Love is blind,

A loss of words,

from an empty mind.

All I can think,

is of you.

I wish, 

I pray, 

and even yearn.

But 

I’m not sure.

If I can sustain
  a stillborn void,

I laugh,

I cry,

If not all of it.

Hopefully,

a casual conversation,

and occasionally,

exchanges of smiles.

then some of you

if not all,

your inner beauty

 That fills 

a heart with joy.

 a gift 

comes in your presence

I’m buried

I can’t lie,

Overwhelmed

With a desire 

some call  puppy love,

love ai first sight

that's my dilemma

but You

so near,

Yet afar.

maybe just a dream

Always full of life,

But,

here comes the sun

 with all my might,

gone is night

For now

we have light

its a new day

I was unable to convey.

because I'm sill in a daze

With my earnest strength,

as i wonder, 

was it a dream.

I have to say

if it was true

through,

that mighty hue,

an abstract view, 

 of you.

if it were true,

would I love you.

 

 

Author's Note

i wrote this a long time ago its a lot of women I've know anyway enjoy and thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

Beautiful. I would be moved to the inner most of my being if i were the recipient of your wonderful poem. You are a real romantic.
~lovely

[Zayra Yves]

beautiful
emotional
passionate

[Phibby Venable]

she will definitely love this. I like the depth of love and the
patient waiting. Very fine.

[Morning Star]

Wow Mauricio you capture all that a woman wants to hear
And you capture so beautifully the scent of romance
Outstanding poem of Love!!
Mauricio hope you’re Christmas and New Year
was filled with Blessings.....Yolie

[Liza]

love untamed and undefined ~ true love like you said is blind of logic ~ just purely felt and served ~ beautiful

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Wonderful depiction of the joys and pains of love.

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Beautiful and very heartfelt!

[floarealbastra10]

i think it is an amazing poem, very touching

[roarke]

yep, sounds like the preludes to love.... steady your balance friend.

[Ron]

Mauricio you are so smitten! I don't think she deserves a man with your talent and emotional depth! Look at Emma below and find a girl in the USA like her. Then two hearts will beat in time. Lovely poem Mauricio.