My Love for Her

My Love for Her

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
"

mi linda amor

"

My Love for Her

 

My emotions 

so strong,

I’m drawn.

Propelled, 

without sight.

 Love is blind,

A loss of words,

from an empty mind.

All I can think,

is of you.

I wish, 

I pray, 

and even yearn.

But 

I’m not sure.

If I can sustain
  a stillborn void,

I laugh,

I cry,

If not all of it.

Hopefully,

a casual conversation,

and occasionally,

exchanges of smiles.

then some of you

if not all,

your inner beauty

 That fills 

a heart with joy.

 a gift 

comes in your presence

I’m buried

I can’t lie,

Overwhelmed

With a desire 

some call  puppy love,

love ai first sight

that's my dilemma

but You

so near,

Yet afar.

maybe just a dream

Always full of life,

But,

here comes the sun

 with all my might,

gone is night

For now

we have light

its a new day

I was unable to convey.

because I'm sill in a daze

With my earnest strength,

as i wonder, 

was it a dream.

I have to say

if it was true

through,

that mighty hue,

an abstract view, 

 of you.

if it were true,

would I love you.


 


 

© 2021 Mauricio Montoya


Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
i wrote this a long time ago its a lot of women I've know anyway enjoy and thank you for reading

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She is a perfect rival
am I right?
you want to love her but you cant get past the thought that you might scare her away from you and that would be worse than unprofessed love

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Amy
She is a very lucky lady! As always, a beautiful piece of work...thank you for sharing.

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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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