calendars

time and space

Calendars

 

A city was built upon a lake

Place a house on a rock they say

But I’ve place my life on the sand

To let the wave of water wash it all away

 

Two calendars coexist to count our days

Yet those dates never remain the same

Seconds become minutes, by thee hour

Only to end and start all over again

 

Time is space that goes without

And Also within 

For there is no end

 

Life feeds from death

For it's no demise 

Giving cause for birth

Lends forth a new beginning

We could never comprehend

While searching to find fault

In something we don't understand

 

By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

Hello everyone I’ve been out for a while so I may be a little rusty there may be some errors so let me know what you think. Thank you

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the new perspective in this poem. Life doesn't end it simply changes direction and form. This is a great thought provoking piece and I love that you a free spirit wrote it only the way you could. It is very intellectual and outstandingly done

[Valentine]

Just looking around this earth and one sees a constant change and new birth of the old. Valentine

[Akshat♥]

Wow,Beautifully written piece...
I can completely relate to this :)
The structure is just wonderful..
Time waits for no one...but the time we got is still very useful
and we can totally use that time for our improvement :)
Keep writing my friend !!

[Devanshu Rajput]

a provoking excellent piece

[Ruth]

You seem to be on a journey of late :) Nice to see that and resonate with the hope you speak of, an insightful piece :)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

No rust visible! A timely poem om a timeless subject.
Seriously, this is a very well woven piece, clear concise, and a pleasure to read and ponder.

[Mary C]

Completely awe inspiring, a wonderful read,

[Desert Dreamer]

Oh, this one is deep and meaningful...I've also found myself at a point in my life where I've realized it doesn't make sense to make houses on rock, better to let the shifting sands bring renewal...and more. Excellent poem.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading this one..Interesting philosophy about life that you present..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work and the time spent reading..Sunflower

[Art]

we are but moments held within time Mauricio...and you have captured it well within the expressions of days and years within calenders that only can remind us of the continued experience of life and death...endings and new beginings...nice work...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great imagery of life's ups and downs!