Character

In the beginning, he pleaded for his life.

 

Now, he begs for his death.

 

Abraham said, "If you want to test a man's character, give him power.”

 

I say, if you want to test a man's character, give him pain.

Author's Note

this is been bouncing around in my head for about a week now. i tried to let it fester until i came up with more to write, but it was giving me a headache.

to be continued...maybe?

Reviews

[Morgan]

This has definitely been bouncing around in your head for a reason! Very creepy and as others have said, very chilling. You should really keep going with this, see where it takes you. Can't wait to read the character that you create who thinks along these lines, very scary. You definitely have something here, go with it!

[StarSandwich]

Yet another good write :D To be continued! I think so. totally dig it :D this will be in my head for sometime now :)

[lostboy]

they are both good tests.

[A.D. Wilson]

Very powerful! Isn't it weird how some things pop into your head and just won't go away until you write them down? Maybe more of the story will appear if you give it time.

[lilshortygirl]

Love love love it...........

[Short.Nerd]

Very good... :)

[.........................]

Amen to this. Pain makes the man. Well, at least that's how I know it. The way the man handles pain gives him the power. I liked this.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

This is some powerful sh** here Tim and it is so true. So few words and such a powerful meaning. I think it is perfect just as it is. Take some advil no need for more with this one. See you become more of a poet everyday indeed. : )

[Roxi L]

Straight to the point. I like it. Scratch that I LOVE IT. Short things like this always leave me wanting more. Awesome!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Jessi Berlasty]

"Abraham said(,) "i(I)f you want"

I like it the way it is. I don't think it should be continued. It says all it needs to say. It isn't hidden. I love it.

[brenda]

dang! this was great yeah continued!!