So Damn Beautiful

So Damn Beautiful

A Poem by Choosing Life

Somewhere between indescribable and extraordinary, you appeared.

Majestically, my King, showed his face, gloriously bronzed

Hazel symphonies of mellow smoothness, wrapping understanding around my dome.

Enlightenment…

Knowledge oozing from the pores of skin, I am basking in…

The Truth he is living.

Strong, yet tenderly he is giving…

Me, a chance to catch up to his stride.

Over standing the lies of other him’s

And how my heart is so scared to feel, so damn beautiful.

He lays back while applying just the right amount of pressure

To hold on, when I get uneasy by my vulnerabilities leaking

Onto the surface of his soul…

Knowing trust is a foreign concept.

He touches me just enough and eases up,

Till I am inwardly yearning for more.

His words bathe me with life and light

And love washes me, from my feet to my head…

When he blesses me with conversation

 

 

© 2008 Choosing Life


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Very nice. Reminds me of a couple great songs on the radio I have heard. I am sure tha man you are speaking about feels very honored. I can't wait to read more.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I mean,,,WOW!, everything you write and converse is amazing, I wish I could hear it but my sound driver is down =( but soon I will..
Just amazing hun, really beautiful.

Love
Me

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've got this way about you. Every time I read you, I get a Floetry, Jean Grae, Georgia Me-like vibe. And I've got to confess that it's so wonderful. You're missing out if you're not putting out some of this stuff in the hands/ears of other people. You do the damn thing.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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