Deeper Into

 

Hair slightly curled brushes against cheeks beckoning your hands to sweep them lovingly behind my ears.. My heart sparkles as thoughts of you gently stroke my mind into calmness and exuberance of what is to come pushes me deeper into… You.

What you don’t see is that your smile causes my soul to shine and your laughter brings joy inside of me. There are places you touch by simply breathing and lovely dances in my eyes as I peer deeper into… You.

 

My days are felt through touches with memories of kisses saturating the depth of my soul, and I feel the ease of laying down my clothes as your hands explore bare skin, and parts of you slide deeper into… Me.

 

My nights are sweeter and sleep comes easier as I find myself counting us, I rest assured in your embrace, and it remains even when your body is away. I catch your glimpses past my skin and I feel diving deeper into… Me.

 

Not sure what our next moment holds, story not yet fully told, I want to be bold, but I shy in the midst of this wave of bliss. I get lost in… your touch, your voice, your kiss. I miss and reminisce on every hit of us in each other’s presence and   I know we are thriving as we get deeper into… Us.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

This is intensely passionate because the heart, mind and soul are as engaged in the intimacy as the underlying body. In fact, it is as if the physicality of love is but the beginning for the even stronger ecstasys that it unlocks as the two hearts, two minds and two souls knot invisibly and indivisibly. It is the utterly positive voice of universal love and life.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

You've got this way about you....almost as if I can see your words swaying, like southern hips. It's beautiful and cool.

Dope write.

[Kelsmiles]

Oh Lovely! I just Know this is how love will be when I'm Finally with my love!

[ELii]

Lovely write. I like the balance of the you's and me's and the one us. Very deep and loving write. flowed very nice.