Nightwish

Nightwish

A Poem by christine zapanta andes
"

life is unconditional

"

 

Nightwish

 

To little twilights twirlin’ that’s full of mirth,

To Mr. Moon please do have pity

Ye’ all heavenly prosecutors lend me an ear,

For my lost hope hath come to an end.

 

My heart’s solely livin’

Drowned to be afraid of breakin’

The fragile self was captivated,

To spent the night with my last prayer.

 

Into my mind I was reminded

 I need a friend, a companion, a fellow

Unconsciously need not my intuition

To choose the most I desire to live with.

 

A tear had fallen seem unbended

‘hope these words to be unbroken

Unfold my heart with a precious wish,

Lingered the longing to have a brother.

© 2013 christine zapanta andes


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very nice,,keep it up.. good work

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love poems that shows night stuff. Well done!
"Unfold my heart with a precious wish". Liked that quote :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, beautiful. Also gotta say, Nightwish is a great band. But I love the poem nonetheless. :) Keep em up.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


I typed in Nigthwish. I am glad. :P
I like the rhythm to this and it gives me a celtic-y feel.


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Posted 8 Years Ago


NIGHTWISH- one of the bands we cover hehhehehehe

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Posted 8 Years Ago


very wonderful.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


don't won't move out the way or say or laugh or even smile yes just to be meaning
and then forget it you're impossible that was really nice thank you i will really enjoy it!!
a short but good/great piece a slice of cake from your little poem
was just so sweet and heartrendering


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Posted 8 Years Ago


really nice , i like it

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Posted 8 Years Ago


It's great and moving. Last to lines in the first stanza are great.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


The very last stanza stayed with me,Our hearts should be portrayed as delicate origami that should only be handled with care and i could envision the need and want for a person in your life who could just be there when you needed somebody

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Posted 8 Years Ago



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