The symphony

Tonight

I see in you

The symphony

of an orchestra of time

you

Release the trapped

Doves of Salem

you

Keep the winds 

From blowing away the sails

you

Clear the pain

of the cold dark ground

you

Making the belles

Sound out the walls

you 

Fill the silent rooms

with laughter

The symphony of love

Entwined in my body

I lace your words

To be engraved 

The locket of us

engaged in a kiss

You have always been

And in symphony 

Gently placed 

The violin in the highest float

A harp of tranquil sea

Piano interlude 

Flute flying on stage

Drums of racing feet

You

The words that fear sound

Visiting the sun 

In the symphony 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Emily]

I love the format of this!!
Keep up the great work!

[Nisreen]

Thank you dear Emily

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A beautiful poem lifted on the sensual strings of the strings section of a symphonic orchestra.

Like all of your poems, there is a soft, sensual tone throughout, like words that seem to drip effortlessly from the tap connected to your mind.

Very Grand and gentle. Lovely writing.

[Nisreen]

thank you so much

[Brian M. Peeples]

Such a fine piece, a delicate flow as though I were reading it beside a riverbed. Perfect in nearly every way, and a rather brilliant collaborative poem where it rolls right off the tongue. I had to read it aloud to feel the full potential of this magnificent piece. Keep it up!

[Nisreen]

thank you Brian

[Richard Patrick]

the poem is a great piece, it allows you relax and take it easy. The poem is beautiful it is sweet harmony.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard

[SmittyJas]

Heavenly sounds of the symphony playing our songs harps of angels in a garrison strike their harps in unison.

[Nisreen]

thank you smitty

[E G TEN]

Hello Nisreen, I thought it was you;) wonderful array of words displayed here cascading
Melody and symphony, wonderful to read and to listen at the same time. Very cool and well
Said my dear, Many Thanks EG.

[Nisreen]

thank you EG :)

[hcarson]

i like the structure and flow of this, it made me read nice and slow..did you intend that effect? i like the comparisons of yourselves to the instruments etc..made it all seem so gentle. real good and im jealous of your ease of words in discription haha..love it :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you .... i guess i am in this nice and slow mood