A beautiful church

A beautiful church

A Poem by Nisreen

Soft drops of rain
descending

a heavenly sky

touched my fingers 
during day

a door made 
of the oldest wood

lit candles
glass painted windows 

the calm bench
only with my thoughts

a prayer

At the Notre Dame 

© 2016 Nisreen


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I've always liked the feel of old churches. You've captured the same essence of peace that I get in them.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nisreen

9 Years Ago

Thank You :)
Very simple and sweet. Nice work, so much meaning from such a small amount of words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nisreen

9 Years Ago

Thank you Annie
Simple, and beautiful, you capture the quiet mood of the church that makes it special.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nisreen

9 Years Ago

Thank You .......
you painted the church beautifully with your words....
like a famous painter would with his or her brush....

the serenity within the sanctuary....

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nisreen

9 Years Ago

thank you so much Jacob :)
J. Hampton

9 Years Ago

you conveyed that feeling you get in your chest sitting in the presence of God.in the echo of the pr.. read more
Nisreen

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback

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Nisreen
Nisreen

United Arab Emirates



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