A beautiful church
A Poem by
Nisreen
Soft drops of rain
descending
a heavenly sky
touched my fingers
during day
a door made
of the oldest wood
lit candles
glass painted windows
the calm bench
only with my thoughts
a prayer
At the Notre Dame
© 2016 Nisreen
Reviews
I've always liked the feel of old churches. You've captured the same essence of peace that I get in them.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very simple and sweet. Nice work, so much meaning from such a small amount of words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very simple and sweet. Nice work, so much meaning from such a small amount of words.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Annie
Simple, and beautiful, you capture the quiet mood of the church that makes it special.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Simple, and beautiful, you capture the quiet mood of the church that makes it special.
9 Years Ago
Thank You .......
you painted the church beautifully with your words....
like a famous painter would with his or her brush....
the serenity within the sanctuary....
j.
Posted 9 Years Ago
you painted the church beautifully with your words....
like a famous painter would with his or her brush....
the serenity within the sanctuary....
j.
9 Years Ago
thank you so much Jacob :)
9 Years Ago
you conveyed that feeling you get in your chest sitting in the presence of God.in the echo of the pr.. read more you conveyed that feeling you get in your chest sitting in the presence of God.in the echo of the prayers of thousands ...deep comfort in the spirit
9 Years Ago
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Added on May 1, 2016
Last Updated on May 1, 2016
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Nisreen United Arab Emirates
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