Thrown

Wholesome care

in addition

describing the dawn

in sleepless time

hoping for a crimson

door to heaven

Inside the corners

of a shiny doorstep

Waiting for the sign

of summing

Reliving the hunt

for life

We dream onto a day

of foiled surreal 

Lingering teachings

a feather figure

to land a landfill 

of subjects we left to talk

naked renditions of seconds

placing no preconditions

to the heart 

Reviews

[BL]

This is dreamy, arttistic and full of light. There are some brilliant individual lines in this poem

[Nisreen]

Thank you Be

[SmittyJas]

I see such tenderness and a calmness in the writer this night this only can bring goodness to light

[Nisreen]

Thank you Smitty

[Mayank]

It's really beautifully written, sounds intriguing and relieving; very dreamy and colorful.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Mayank

[FaeryQueen]

Loved this!
Great work!!
Keep on writing!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Ruth]

Beautiful...this made me travel...a wonderful visual piece Nisreen :)

[Nisreen]

Thank You Poppy

[andrew mitchell]

Wow its like you took me everywhere in a day then finally to your heart. A nice write Nisreen.

[Nisreen]

So someone got it lol
Thanks Andrew

[hcarson]

ok i will be honest as thats what reviews are for lol...not sure i get this one. i know that issue of understanding/getting it lies with me and not your great writing or expression of the truths of this world my brain simply isn't connecting the dots tonight!! i will look again and review in the morning when ...hopefully...i am functioning better :)

[Nisreen]

It's alright .... Thanks for trying

[hcarson]

i will come back and try again :)

[Nisreen]

Don't worry about it .... You are a very sweet person

[GreenShoes]

I'm sorry to say I simply don't understand this poem.

[Nisreen]

It's alright .... Thanks for the visit :)

[wordman]

a beautiful write,and great images

[Nisreen]

Thank you .............