Provoking Innocence

The shortest distance

 Accross vastness 

 Ignited glimpses 

Abreast a flare

 Tighter light

 Dabs a soul 

Paved drawings

 Of The deep ocean 

Color set in song 

Lilac teals of You

 Softest blue

 Rivers of flooding note

Embrace a physical existence 

Cheek full garden 

A botanical angel

 Pours Inscribed pathways

 Knockîng in joy  

The dawn strings of morning

 Guiding skin to réflect

 On a soul mirror 

Asking walls to fall 

Pilots flew through thought 

Roses placed by The door 

 Dancing in petal red

 Overpowerîng grasp of air 

 Breaths out  

Coming at  innocence 

 Sleeping in an abode 

Crafting your bare hands 

Pairing up with innocence 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. Amazing. The strong description create visions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Once again, a poem of lush images and with a soft flow of thoughts.

You have used some very original words throughout the piece and topped it off with a very lovely picture, as always.

Nice work.

[Echoes of Eros]

Every line seems filled with both color and life, words as seeds growing in a garden of the mind and heart. The music is soft, smooth, and awakens the heart to the joy of this coming innocence. Beautiful. xo

[Wolf_Lord]

This is beautiful... Is it a particular type of poem. It reminds me of couplets, except 1st and second do not rhyme. Just curious.
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

[Lydia Shutter]

A bit surrealistic in nature, but it drew me in. That artwork you chose to accompany your words is stunning. Lydi**

[Nisreen]

Thank you Lydia :)

[thetish]

I love the colors that dance in your words. What a talent you have!

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much :)

[Emily]

'Color set in song
Lilac teals of You'

Love this stanza!
Keep it up!!

[Nisreen]

Means Alot coming from you Emily
Knowing your taste in poetry
Thank you

[Spencer Barker]

You paint the picture very well! You have multiple kinds of symbols working in this poem and they all achieve your point. Great writing!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Spencer :)

[Einstein Noodle]

so many wonderful lines for me ..but have to mention:
"Tighter light
Dabs a soul" and:

"Guiding skin to réflect
On a soul mirror'

just wonderful!!
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you E ..... always enjoy reading your review

[Einstein Noodle]

oh yes ..the flower pic is very sexy :)

[stephsand14]

Beautiful! I enjoyed reading this piece.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Stephanie