Unforgotten

Here comes the midnight sun.

Shining from far away,

Heart be still.

Subject to his desolate soul

He lifts up his head, he hears her tormented soul.

Just like the fire from his star studded twins

He glares behind looking so grim.

She catches his train of thoughts

Her heart pounding like a mad man beating on his drum.

She halts.

Trapped like a prey caught in the master’s hound.

She leaps into the air struggling not to be bound.

His eyes sparkle as he reaches his goal

She whimpers of defeat as he clutches her womb.

Twin peaks of fire scorching in his blistering heat.

He thumbs through her hair as she seeks for release.

He follows through with that ghastly touch

Oh how she moans of wonder and plight.

She screams and she moans as she arches her back.

Waiting for him to begin his attack.

He then follows through siccing with teeth.

Slicing her flesh and keeping her weak.

She falls, unbound by the man she once knew

A man who has fallen from faith he once had

All this to satisfy his hunger for his lass.

Reviews

[Twilight]

This is quite powerful writing, and never has any need to use profane language or crudity. Indeed, the writer has used some emotive words, and expressed this piece from the woman's perspective. The male (in contrast), is portrayed as beast-like and slightly less than human. A lost soul, perhaps? Another thought-provoking poem, topsyturvy! And, quite well written!

[Liza]

hmmmmm you kept me guessing, it seems violent and sensual all at the same time. Almost like a man is devouring his mistress either for physical pleasure or to subordianate her under his authority...

great write!

[Kara]

nice :D i like the rhyming