VAMPIRE KILLER

A VAMPIRE TURNED BY ANOTHER VAMPIRE

BROKEN AND BLEEDING.THRISTY FOR LIFE.AS I TEAR THROUGH THE VEINS OF HUNDREDS IN A CROWD ABSORBING MEMORIES AS I FEED I TEAR DEEP AS I FEEL A CHILL AND THE THRILL OF THE HUNT SENDS ME OUT FOR MORE KILLING DOZENS IN MY PATH I LAUGH AS I LEAVE DOZENS OF BODIES TONS OF VICTIMS DRAINED OF BLOOD.DOWN TO THE VERY LAST DROP.I AM A MURDERER WHAT I WAS IS FOREVER GONE FADED INTO THE SANDS OF TIME.I DRINK DEEP THE LIFE IN THE VEINS OF THE LIVING AND GET RICH IN POWER AS THE BLOOD DRAINS FOR MY VICTIM I AM NEVER SAITED I AM THE VAMPIRE THE THING YOU FEAR I AM THE SHADOW OF YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE

Author's Note

no note really just a dark vampire poem

Reviews

[Nath]

In a way, we're all like this lost creature, though maybe not quite as murderous. We're all lost at times, trying to feed a hunger for... more... never to be sated.
This dude has sure as hell lost it in his failed quest for satisfaction - he probably won't ever find peace.
I'd rather pity him than fear him.
He's only my worst nightmare in so far as it would be a nightmare to be like him, forever striving, never satisfied, never at rest.
A dark mind brilliantly captured, well done!

[LKBillips]

I would like to see this broken up more. It seems like one big clump of words. There is some powerful imagery in there, but I get lost among the caps lock. Perhaps you want me lost among the string of thoughts. Confused and searching for what happens next.

[genocide]

thanks for your reviews my dear keep them coming

[Cherrie Palmer]

this would make a good intro to a larger work.

[K. Hicks]

I love this! this is how the horror side of vampires are supposed to be!

[Alene Parr]

I love that this seems to be just a continuous string of thoughts. Like it's what goes through the vampire's mind while he's on the prowl. Nice job.

[Me]

dark chilling...love it! :) x

[dw817]

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Actually that is not just a dark vampire poem, Tor. That is one kick-a$$ scary vampire. I doubt even Blade could stand up to him. Very creepy and definitely a ghoulish if not the ruler of the night. Well written.

(Now let's see what kinna dreams I have tonite) :O

[Sheila Kline]

Oooooh, gives me the shivers of a vampire drain of power by blood!! The vampires roam in our land this dark season........