Blow Your Mind Baby

Just more melancholy

I cut my self tonight
I'm bleeding every drop
Of my love for you
Oh don't you know baby
And I feel so good tonight
I'm riding the storm
And I like it
Like soft dissolve baby
So I hope that maybe
This way
You'll feel some
Sympathy for me
As you find all alone
Still holding your picture
I hope it blows your mind baby

Reviews

[cloud]

I imagine this fellow went insane after years of bull. Possibly, he could also be an insane lover she never even met? Its happened. I wonder if his storm has enough strength to take him away as the rivulets leave his body? All questions derived from reading your poem. I'm sure her mind is blown. In fact I know it is.

[Jeffrey Backer]

I love your review,I actually think your review is better then my poem And thank you.