The Last Poem of Seasons.

An interesting poem I wrote intertwining the ideas and feelings of love, with the flow of the seasons, and the world.

The seasons of my mind and the seasons of my soul.

Come together like the bird whistles in the sky.

“Both beautiful, mysterious.”  The angels sing in tolls.

For sure they fly in harmony like angels, by and by.

 

The only thing that happens true

To keep my soul from singing high,

Is when the troubles amuck are blue

And all that I can do is cry.

 

But fear not friend for this I say.

I believe in truth and find:

The seasons are like beauty days.

So tempest winds, I don’t mind.

 

A beautiful bird of my soul and the night

Restless and longing for a chance to rest.

Yet the bird finds to his fright,

He was put to the ultimate test.

 

Yes the seasons are like sun and moon,

And also like the bird and soul.

If you look and see, you’ll soon

Find your heart is not stone.

 

So fret not friend, and do not fear.

Trouble comes and trouble goes.

But listen closely, far and near,

The beautiful seasons call real low:

 

“Oh beautiful heart, and beautiful soul!”

It’ll say as it grows stronger.

“I love everything and you’ll know,

I will live on for longer.”

 

So with a season comes, a seasons leaves.

And when it does, I quiver.

For only I can think that thieves,

With ruthless hearts won’t shiver.

 

If this poem isn’t helping you,

To find out why you’re in this.

Then look ahead and you’ll see through

The season ends with a sweet kiss.

 

 

 

 

<3

S.W.A.K.

 

~Casiél Wintermoon, 7/29/09, 1:40 P.M.

Author's Note

I'll be honest, I don't expect people to understand my writing. I've come to the decision that I don't mind it. I don't need constructive criticism however. You can all still rate it. But I don't need comments. I understand how I feel, and what the poem means to me. That's enough knowledge and constructive criticism for me. Thank you all anyway.
=)
~Casi�l Wintermoon

Reviews

[Violet Rose]

You don't need constructive criticism, eh? All righty then.