For You

For you,
my mind acts out its disobedience
in sensuous frenzies
you rush me into raging rivers,
though I can't see your hands
you kiss me drunken
with lips of primal aphrodisiac,though I can't feel them ravaging
and my heart skips
and leaps into ecstatic arrhythmia
as giddy as a child following the mind

In this world of you,
it rains pearls and
I am a leaf,
as light as your air,
floating in your wind
in this place,
my love exists in drops of tears,
liquid symbols of joy,
releasing fears.

I climb high
to dive deep
in the infinite ocean of your soul
and I beg for drowning in your heart's beating

In this place,
your messages are electric
currents running through me
and I am a love
awakened simply by your name

Reviews

[gabrielle]

Deliriously seductive piece, lynn. There is always someone who brings out the fire and passion in us. Classy :)

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Not always, Gabrielle, but the ones that do are truly remarkable :) thank you

[Antonio Valentino]

Ooooh this was so good..

thank you for sharing it Lynn, it did my heart swell

:)

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thank you, Antonio :)

[Adam Adams]

Sadistically, supersonic waves bashed 'pon my vibrant heart having your alcoholic words across its unfazed beats! Beautiful. The title "For You" is itself an enormous thing to be "read" & understood deeply, it displays, how one can get relinquished whole to someone, in love. However, the way you've written 'tis piece so immensely along with some consensual so sensuous words's the foremost thing to be appreciated as well that further makes me having this write saved in library & I'd like to keep it save for long. This piece's for desperation that's being stirred with emotions nicely. Excellent work!

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Adams, thank you so much for such a wonderful review :)))

[Adam Adams]

An honor to me to visit your poetry. There's always some kinda depth - a real nice realism of depths's always being found in your systematic words which further touch an every vibe of my vibrant heart, deeply. One thing's pretty clear for sure that you've a talent - a very artistic talent that you better know how to shape alongwith articulation. Very impressive. Have at it!

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I am truly humbled, Adams, thank you so much

[~]

verses that make me tremble in the joy and magic of the images. ohh.. only the heart knows all these truths about "you".. loved that last stanza.. it zapped me back to a sweet sunshine! :D

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The last stanza loves you too skittles :))))

[emmajoy]

Lynn, this is how it should be, ' In this world of you, - it rains pearls and I am a leaf, - as light as your air, floating in your wind .. '

Amazing words, passionate feelings, beautifully laid - absolute sincerity. Could say more but your poem says it all.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my!! such abandon .. its what men want the power to do .... maybe not all "men" ..but this one for sure ;)
very sensuous and inspiring ;) power packed .. one to read along with a lover
E.

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Luv ya, E. your visits make me smile..thank you, my friend

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn i feel the current of love in this one....

poetic electricity which if we are not careful as readers, might just short circuit our system...

excellent metaphors used in the description.

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Thank you Jacob. I'm so glad you felt the current, sir :))

[St.Quin]

Your sense of creativity is enveloped with deep sincerity to your emotions, I am awed by the line 'I am a love, awakened simply by your name' . I am glad that I randomly browsed the writings and came across this one, so beautifully penned.

[wordman]

a beautiful write lynn,your heart has awakened to feel love again

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Thank you, Ron. Yes it has :))

[wordman]

i am glad for you ;

[Chris]

one hell of a poem Lynn...

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Ah Chris, good seeing you, and thank for your warm review :)

[Chris]

It's meant... you really "brought" it.

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Thank you, sir, I'm glad you approve :)

[Chris]

nothing to do with approving...just an observation of the strength of your thoughts.