Focused

Focused

A Poem by ...

There's a vastness in" Being"
when you are just, being, and nothing else
when you are present...aware..but more...
aware of being aware...focused
paying attention to the presence of...God
you are every thing and no thing
you are all. 

© 2015 ...


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I am reminded of the poem, "No Thing" I read on WC last week.
This memory aside, it is a wonderful state of mind to be focused like this. Most of the time when we think of focus it is single minded and shuts out anything other than a predetermined expectation. This directed focus is a focused ambition and is prevalent in a materialistic culture.
Here, you offer a receptive form of focus. You describe a tuning in to All... A concept of the transcendental.
Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The poetry's seemed to be written the full faith of love, simplicity & virtue. The "vastness" is nicely pen'd up in words. The message behind the poetry's quite simple which says: "Be Real. Be Original. And, don't waste your time in wandering ov'r the duality of life in a hope to get "nothing". God's always with you to lead you right so always be real and have some faith in you and God rather, putting it whole in someone." Not a bad shot. Nicely written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you, Adams :)
I sense there is a vastness in me, but it's full of butterfly distractions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


great write, Lynn... being aware of one's own awareness, and being able to visualize its vastness, must certainly be the epitome of focus... love it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you, my dear, sir :))) glad you like it
deep write, but a simple connotation...."just be"

and absorb the beauty of being allowed to "just be"---

nicely expressed.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

I do love your visits,Jacob. Thank you :)

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