Being

Sometimes I fade
into the everything of nothing
to be the nothing of everything
to just...Be...just me...
"I" exempt of anything else.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Like all of nature, we collect baggage... Thankfully, we can "cleanse" ourselves of attachments with a practiced ease.
I sense you know well how to distill your soul.
A breath of fresh air here.

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:) thank you, my friend

[Mr. Stage Four]

short perhaps, but contains a depth that is deeply felt by the reader

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Thank you, sir

[-Scribe in Style-]

The last line has such great impact on the reader. - "I" exempt of anything else - That is the life I want to build for myself and that is how I would like people to see me!
Well phrased!
A

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Thank you so much, my dear :)

[rubie]

A very compelling write, with much to contemplate in its simplicity.

We are part of every molecule of the universe; we are all connected.

Yet, at the same time, we are none of it in our own uniqueness.

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indeed we are, Rubie...Thank you

[Adam Adams]

I fade
into the everything of nothing
to be the nothing of everything...

Beautiful composition of words it is. I like how pro-actively you submerge yourself with... into the philosophical dialect-ion of life. Your attributes speaking off this piece that how desperately you needa kick out everyone's life whoever curses you whole up. You wanna be just "you" .. ain't wish to walk the life putting yourself into someone's very shoes. You be just "you"... ain't want anyone to hustle you doing what they want you to. Very thought provoking write you've come up with. Great job!

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Thank you, Adams. Your reviews are so very generous and kind

[Lydia Shutter]

Great play on words. I liked it. Lydi**

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Ms Lydi, I'm so glad you like it :) Thank you for coming by!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the play on the pronouns here, works so well...reminds me of phil collins' "lonely man on the corner"--

"he sees everything and nothing at all"
just being ourselves is most rewarding, regardless of what others want to think of us...

we need to be who we are.

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You're awesome, Jacob, and had I thought of it and was savy enough with the computer (which I'm not ) I certainly would have added it :)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no need to, the poem speaks well enough for itself.

j.

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such a deep write about finding the 'I' in oneself where nothing else exists...as if to view it from outside the body while knowing one is still within... this is the epitome of being...well-done, Lynn

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Ft, you allways make my page happy...thank you for that!

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it's my pleasure, Lynn, to leave my words on a page worthy of so much more... I love your work...you may say, I am a fan, but you probably know that already :D