painful lie

Loss of a friend that used to be a loved one
the thought of loss is overbearing
sweet whispers of wind drift me to my dreams
Wait !
am i ready ? I'm scared ..
don't want to mess up again although i can feel me beginning to because its the story of me

I'm so sorry

i feel the suffering of the world
maybe just my life as the lines rush across my eyes.
not realizing what i have done
trying not to cry
my eyes are heavy my heart so sore
trying to stop breathing
HALT!!


why my life is so full of stains that i feel cold and wake up till one day
why do i have to lie in this 6inch hole full of damp & cold
then i am told that the pain in my stomach like the warmth & cold has taken over my home
so alone


i wait for the light that may never brighten up my day
now all gray
my pain hurts so much especially today
i hate this day
this way my pain takes over everything
cold and alone in this misery is making me crazy

these lines don't faze me anymore watching every last inch drain from me doesn't give me any grief ...
every drop that falls brings peace to me and i finally feel alive ...

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

A well-written, unique, honest, thoughtful, emotional poem which has a contradictory style of raw thought processes and refined language and understanding. Brilliant. Thank you.

[Sahar moonlight]

An honest poem written by heart.

Its so emotional.
And the photo enriched the meaning.

Natty

[raymondb]

I Realy like your pome, I look foward to reading more,