Natural Disasters

Natural Disasters

A Poem by Ina
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The pain of love ruins my mind.

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Love is a natural disaster.
Like a hurricane its anguish is trapped between the shades of blue,
its pain knows the depths of the oceans, yet clings to the freedom of the sky.

Love is a natural disaster.
Like a tornado tormented with the weight of debris it rips up the soul,
its agony gyrates the emotions, withering inside itself with the ruins of scattered wind. 

Love is a natural disaster.
Like an earthquake it breaks the spirit causing erosion between plates of passion & sorrow,
its distress caught rasping the nerves, caving within a comfortable burial of earth.

Love is a natural disaster.
Like a tsunami rushing with panic as it seeks out its wreckage in the mind,
its grief rising fast alongside its regret, absorbed like a sponge all the sorrows of the sea.

© 2011 Ina


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This really good work. You have a great imagination and a good detail for the right words.

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heartbreak is organic and necessary much like natural disasters which is why I think this piece works so well. Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


or is love the victim of disastrous expectations? like your metaphor and the rhythm of your piece. nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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