I'm Sorry

we all have regrets

I'm sorry for the rash decisions I made
That I didn't let you explain
That I moved on so fast
Will you forgive me?

I'm sorry that I didn't give you a second chance
That I haven't talked to you in a while
That I wasn't better for you
Won't you forgive me?

I'm sorry for wasting your time
That I didn't explain it all
That I wasn't more understanding
Can't you forgive me?

I'm sorry for the pain I caused
That I broke your heart
That I lost your trust
I know it's unforgivable.

Reviews

[Aarea]

How sad. I hope she will forgive him, or him her or whatever. I like that he (or she) is admitting they are wrong, that they fouled up. The poem sounded great to my ears and kept a steady pattern, which is very good. Great job Violent!!!

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you! yes, i have a thing for rhythms. i make my poems have more rhythm than rhyme haha