Rage

can you tell i was mad? :3

It kindles a fire within and

summons your inner demon

to destroy it all

tear the house apart

obliterate the memories

Set yourself free and

burn all the books

suffocate all the voices

in your head

with the smoke

Voices that are urging, urging

urging you on in the

red haze

of blood lust

seeking release

in a violent explosion

of anger and frustration and sparks

But that's all in your head

You just sit there

and marvel at the feeling

the feeling of raw power

and let the rage build on

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a very good poem, with an urgency that describes the feeling. I might suggest, should I be so bold, that "summons" your inner demon, might sound better than calls to, since to is repeated in the next line.

[The Violent Wolf]

touche, i like not repeating words like that haha thank you!