If only

Good morning, good night

As I see the sun and you see the moonlight 

I listened to a voice so familiar, so comforting 

Like a book you read on a rainy day, 

A smile, a laugh, that can take worries away 

"If only", he whispered 

Like the faint smell of spring, his words lingered 

Through the phone, you can hear our yearning 

With each word, we're slowly learning 

That maybe this world just isn't ready 

For a love so great 

A love that knows no time, 

A love that knows no place.

Author's Note

Just a random feeling in the moment that I thought I'd share

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Love finds its place and time
Living through so much
It is the vary definition of resilience

[Twistedwords]

I agree. Sometimes to be resilient, we must know our weaknesses first. Learning to let go of something that just isn't for you. At least for now. Thanks for your input! It made me think of a lot of things :)

[Nisreen]

Not sure if one ever lets go
Because love has this hold
It's not like one chooses this position

But I guess giving your significant other
Space
To think
Contemplate
And relive every moment
It's vital in any bond between two
If they wish to be together for life

[Nisreen]

Sorry for writing a lot

[Twistedwords]

please don't apologize. I appreciate all your comments! I get so caught up in my own thoughts so its nice to have someone tell me what they think from their point of view.. It helps me re-evaluate things and see it from a different perspective; a positive one too. So thank you!

[Shannon]

Longing is so clear here. Distance between us has become both very small and yet still so far in this world.

[Twistedwords]

Thank you for your comment! I really appreciate it. Its just the perfect love at the wrong time. We can't always have what we want right? :)