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The Rose on the Tor

The Rose on the Tor

A Poem by D. Pesek

Oh how she wishes she were that crimson red rose,

That dazzles the eyes and tickles the nose.

Beauty and danger, an amalgam of two,

Mystery is hidden within its warm hue.

She knows it holds secrets, and wants nothing more,

Than to discover the meaning of this rose on the tor.

© 2009 D. Pesek


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Congrats on your great winning poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Sean Allen :O

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



~ this is such a lovely capture, D
you paint a beautifully haunting image
that will stay with me long after the reading
lovely rhythm and rhyme
*hugs*
Sasha xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very deep and unique style... love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This brings many possible thoughts to mind all of which I am sure are wrong!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yer best.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Looking deeply can often sweep one away. A wonderfully short piece. Enigma. Love it. Bravo.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 6, 2009
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