The Cloud

The Cloud

A Poem by lilfriend
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A poem about Self Realization

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Are You a Cloud

Are you soft like a feather
Or are you loud
Are You a Cloud

Are you humble around the winds
Or are you staying proud
Are You a Cloud

Are you afraid of sun
Or are you shadowing the heavens
Are You a Cloud

Are you not going to survive for long
Or are you ready to bring a storm
Are You a Cloud

Are you holding just drops and mist
Or are you going to strike with thunderous fist
Are You a Cloud

Have seen you living over a distant mound
Have heard your mysterious murmuring sound
I hope to find you in my heart someday
You are far yet near, will face you without a fear

Are You a Cloud

© 2022 lilfriend


Author's Note

lilfriend
English is not my first language.

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“Are you holding just drops and mist
Or are you going to strike with thunderous fist
Are You a Cloud”

My favourite verse
Beautiful poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a deep poem
Very stirring spiritual
Well done

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lilfriend

1 Year Ago

Thanks Julie for encouraging words, its important for a newcomer like me.
Seems to be a comment on fears and possibilities. The speaker repeats the question "Are you a cloud?" multiple times, always regarding whether one's potential is being reached. Many are held back by fears, but the speaker here is asking why.

Posted 1 Year Ago


lilfriend

1 Year Ago

Thanks John, your words are reassuring, as I am able to convey the feelings, I wanted to.

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