my love

She is most certainly my muse

Sorrow consumes days your absence exists
visual images serve an inadequate solution
As the synchronized figure 8's in tummy persist
I pray this crimson red rose is not an illusion

Tangible to the soul, audible to the heart
Visual to the body, aromatic to the mind
Non-dissipating, won't poof like a fart
Your spirit and mine, eternally intertwined

Connection exceeding the Mariana Trench
Any topic discussed, any issues addressed
Loose lugs tightened by our conversation wrench
Relationship developing despite being tensed

Queen of my heart, and ruler of my brain
Commanding, and strong, yet loving and gentle
Without you my love, i fear going insane
My love for you is spiritual, emotional, and mental

Reviews

[SW..if..TY]

HELL YEAH BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!! very well done!!

[Trigorin]

Not bad, and you've definitely got a very rough, raw topic here, and I think you've explored it fairly well in this piece. Some of your word choice is a little off, and make sure to check your grammar, but as it stands this is very nice. Well done.