Boy 20-63 july 14, 3021

           "Beep, Beep, Beep," my alarm clock screeched before I slapped the snooze button. 15 minutes later it started carrying on again, so I finally decided to get up. I then shuffled over to my to wake him up.
           " hay man, com on wake up," I said poking him in the ribs.
           "What if I don't want to?"
           "then I'll go and get one of the wardens to change your mind," I teased.
           The wardens are basically the teachers of the ward. They are responsible for teaching, guarding the ward, and especially punishment.
           "That's not funny Ash you know I'm still trying to get over last weeks whipping," Donnie cried in terror," I mean your getting out of here today, but I still have two more years to go,"
           that's rite I'm leaving the ward today. since I'm sixteen the ward practically throws you to the mobile infantry to start your new career, defending the federation.
           Donny must have seen my frown because he said, "Well no more gloom and doom, lets go see if there still serving breakfast in the cafeteria."
           "Ya sure," I said and throe on some old close and walked outside.
           I didn't make it ten feet before I entered a black void and hit the floor.  

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sorry its kinda short im just wanting feedback

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