Quiet mind

Quiet mind

A Poem by Nassira
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It was like a breath of peace and quietness in my mind that sent echos to my soul. I enjoyed those moments so much:)

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Peace of mind…

Feeling of calm …the Divine.

Absolute reflection dipped in observation.

Definite conviction unmoved by the motion.

Affirmatively rooted extending all branches.

Actively progressing until each stem flourishes.

Not refusing to see .... the light of certainty.

Heart fully open to the touch of His bounty.

I inhale, I exhale ... releasing admiration.

Breathing along the essence... the potion.

Its soothing effect caressing my soul.

Gently envelop it for a stroll.

Sensation of the moment.

I grab it ...I attempt.

With an audible sigh

A glance at the sky

Finally I find

Peace of mind

© 2008 Nassira


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What a beautifully calming poem. It left me feeling very peaceful. I could not help but notice the shape of your poem looks like a hot air balloon. Someone (more graphically talented than I am) might be able to design a basket under the poem and include a cloudy background. I can picture a presentation like that in my mind and just thought I'd share. :-) Sharon

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a beautifully calming poem. It left me feeling very peaceful. I could not help but notice the shape of your poem looks like a hot air balloon. Someone (more graphically talented than I am) might be able to design a basket under the poem and include a cloudy background. I can picture a presentation like that in my mind and just thought I'd share. :-) Sharon

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope to read more of your beautiful words very soon.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an absolutely beautiful piece of writing, the format, the words, the deep feeling behind it, Bravo! Nassira, awesome poem. Thank you for sharing this with the world.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very beautiful and peaceful! And peace and love and all that we treasure are just in "moments" that we don't let pass with out breathing it in! Lovely!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, calm, inspiring.

What fine poetry you write, create. It's truly lovely.

I grab it ...I attempt.

With an audible sigh
A glance at the sky
Finally I find
Peace of mind

and so should we all.

Thank you for sharing.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nassira
Nassira

Harrow, London, United Kingdom



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