I've Done It

I know about struggle and pain, the scars remain

from wantin' change, stayin' the same

passin' the blame, playin' the game

chasin' the fame, havin' no shame

I've done it.

I know about love and respect

I recollect hurt and neglect, cause and effect

not what you expect, coming correct

serve and protect, last I checked

I've done it.

I know about you and me, our destiny

what we could be, happy

alive and free, makin' memories

I've done it.

I know about this and that, when I look back

tit for tat,  all that crap

from where I'm at, it's in the past

I've done it.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

I'm left to wonder, Keely, if you're as jaded as you might seem(?), but in as much that you seem to resist responding to reviews, I'm guessing I'll have to be content to keep wonderin'. 😏
Wondering, too, if you read this or will ever know that I take time to read your splendid poetic offerings.

Just in case, I'll leave sayin' how very much I've enjoyed reading You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Pete Langley]

This is one of the better pieces I`ve read of yours, Keely. I like the layout and the theme, though I think you may have tried for some less hackneyed phrases. Keep writing - you`re getting there. P.

[larryb]

Rhythms Devine

[Jack...]

Well you've certainly done it this time...very cool.

[DIVYA]

Time to move on to better and more meaningful things when we realize we are done with all the petty tit for tat and the mundane strife.

You say it here superbly!

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done here keely

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really needs a melody...i feel song in this one...terrific rhythm and really cool wording.

the beat is so natural.

jacob

[zainul]

Congratulations for doing it successfully by taking the challenge.
Wonderful write.